A String of Stars

A String of Stars

A Poem by CM-Stars

This longing
starts in my chest.
An unfilled longing
To feel
Intertwined with her
Heartbeats,
Words,
Thoughts,
Screams,
Indistinguishable in time.
A string of stars-
Their light revealing us.

© 2018 CM-Stars



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I struggle with Anxiety and depression. It sucks sometimes but the cure that I've found is to write! It's the most joyful thing that I do. Just write! It will take away those pains and hardships. I would also like to say that you have real potential in your writing and I am Genuinely surprised how amazing your writing style is! It was fantastic and I just wanted to let you know that you could even one day be a published author/writer if you wanted to! Keep smiling, keep writing, and most importantly. be you! You have a talent and this is a talent that all people should see and read!
I have a story here about my best friend, you don't have to read it if you don't want to, but I felt like I should share it with you. :)

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/

Posted 2 Months Ago


Brevity is sometimes the most powerful path of expression... it is a beautiful sentiment to feel that words and heartbeats are indistinguishable...we are made of stardust, yet still a longing can leave us breathless. Lovely writing

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CM-Stars

2 Months Ago

Thank you. :)
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Sometimes things seem to just bubble up in us!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very Romantic writing you have a romantic eye for words to say in the right ways.


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CM-Stars

2 Months Ago

Well thank you for the kind words. :)
Just a sigh . Relating it.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Nice one, I like it... :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


CM-Stars

2 Months Ago

Thank you. Glad you liked it!
Written with a gentle passion, feel its as sincere as it can be.

Posted 3 Months Ago


CM-Stars

2 Months Ago

Why thank you!
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Welcome :)
A romantic statement.nice to feel alive wanting someone

Posted 3 Months Ago


CM-Stars

2 Months Ago

Thank you! :)
Very nice it's almost gt the feel of bipolar

Posted 3 Months Ago


this is touching and full of feeling.

A string of stars-
Their light revealing us.

good write. :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CM-Stars

3 Months Ago

Why thank you! :)

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Added on March 2, 2018
Last Updated on March 4, 2018
Tags: Love, Relationship, Stars, crush


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