Contest writings-Wishes that drive me home tonight

Holy Spirit driven Love for Our Lord Jesus Christ

Phrase Driven Poem

W.B.Yeats Poem

Aedh Wishes for the cloths of heaven

Phrase-

I have spread my dream under my feet

Tread softly because you tread on my dreams

It was a rainy night in Georgia

Pouring down like cats and dogs

Couldn't see out of my window shield

My wiper blades were waring thin

I slowed down for God Sake

I didn't want to wreck my car

It was a nineteen forty three Chevy

A real Classic car from way back far

That night was the time to as you know

I spread my dreams under my feet

Tread softly because you tread on my dreams

and it just could crush my future plans

Of being with my Gal of fate

My dear soul mate

I was to meet her here at eight

She must be late

Reviews

[Valentine]

A 1943 Chevy, wow that would be a Classic today. Valentine

[Helena]

Jim,

You weaved the 'phrase' into this poem so well. Good job.

Thank you for joining in the contest! ~ Helena ~

[wordman]

rainy night in Georgia,i can see a song here too smitty