CRUX

Flowers are grown up
Butterflies have flown so up
lamp lights showing road
Choose Either short or broad!

Indeed nut is filtered
Four walls lead to fuss
Unshrinkable mass leave me jittered
Let's try fire flies,
Either carrying truth or lies!

No love, better , if loving miserably
Tornadoes of lust though lower pleasure
Myths are heavily loaded,
Threshold is incompletely eroded
Sun bath is free of cost
Either rise or stay lost!

Having and putting, differs
Reality ultimately conquers
Shameless is working best
Let your bulb on, let the
Current pass on
Let the Transparent flow it's way
Show your color of crown
Either golden or brown!

Author's Note

Good day!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved your words. Direct, honest and so good.
"Myths are heavily loaded,
Threshold is incompletely eroded
Sun bath is free of cost
Either rise or stay lost! "
The above lines. Hard and true words shared. Must rise, not fall. Sometime, can fall forever. Thank you Sneh for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Sneh]

Your review was overwhelming dear coyote, thanks for the encouragement! 💐

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[barleygirl]

Since I am a straightforward person, I do not always catch what you mean with each line, but I love how you use unexpected imagery to make strong bold statements without explaining or describing. Just blunt statements, painting each idea to be pondered. My favorite is the last verse, which appeals to my straightforward way of reading . . . I totally get this part! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Sneh]

I am glad you liked it, thank you so much! Keep reading and sharimg your words.. :)

[Suhd]

A very vivid poem as it starts with fluttering butterflies. Your style is so unique and original that it creates such delight while reading it. Stanza no. 3 is just fabulous, I mean, the idea there! Brilliant work

[Sneh]

Thank you so much! 😊

[Suhd]

Pleasure :)

[Tony]

"Let your bulb on, let the
Current pass on
Let the Transparent flow it's way "
Honestly is a fine quality. At least that's the way I was moved by your words.
Awesome poetic language throughout your poem. Anyway you interpret it.

[Sneh]

My works are often based on motivation, that's what I always need ,to run in the race of life..anyways your review was genuine and so thank you!! :)

[Chris Shaw]

"Tornadoes of lust though lower pleasure." How true that is Sneh. There is no love in lust. Follow the light I say. There is enough darkness in this world. All good wishes to you and thank you for your poetry.

Chris

[Sneh]

Yes, striving for an opportunity...as rainbow, light is rare ! Thanks a ton Chris 💐
Love, sneh

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome dear one. Have a great day.

[Jade]

Myths are heavily loaded,
Threshold is incompletely eroded
Sun bath is free of cost
Either rise or stay lost!

Intrigued by these words here, This is so very good.
really enjoyed this write

[Sneh]

Brandie, m very happy that you enjoyed. keep sharing your insights! :) thank you