But a Fragment

But a Fragment
By: Adam M. Snow

 

What is this picture, but a fragment
of life's shattered dream?
Being the lost that I am,
seeking a lifeless gleam.

 

T'was a night among nights,
arose the thoughts of me;
a vision appeared before my being,
drowning out the sea.

 

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Reviews

[Jetta Zippora]

Wow. I am never quite sure of the meaning in most poems, but that's what makes it more magical and epic. It's personal yet full of connected wisdom. Your writing style is flawless and this is such a clear image in my mind. Soothing, searching, wandering...I'd give it a standing ovation. Well written, friend.

[Adam M. Snow]

Why thank you my dear friend

[Jazique]

Nice I want to say now that is poetry but, it is like Jetta I'm not quite sure of the meanings at time either but, I dod know when I read a good its good. So well done as this poem was truely magico . Bravo ( clapping hands.)

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem open the door to question and thoughts. The questions. Picture, life and dreams are what we are. I like the way you ending the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[VelvetRosetta]

This is a breathtaking piece of work you have here I am loving it so, I have read it about 10 times, captivating and intriguing!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[VelvetRosetta]

Your Welcome

[sharonlee]

Ah...the fragments that make a shattered whole.... well said

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[MOON]

Short deep write, almost searching drowning in the process.

[Talks To Trees]

when one fully comes awake all is gone except the fleeting memory. Thank you for sharing

[Amila Jay]

Wow .. I was completely absorbed into your words .. it's a beautiful write :))

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Lilith]

This is quite beautiful. Not to upset you but this honestly reminds me of Annabell Lee by Edgar Allan Poe, which is one of my favorites. Amazing.

[Adam M. Snow]

My friends usually would call me the modern day Poe because my poems resemble so much like his

[Lilith]

They do, and they are well written. Poe is my favorite poet next to Maya Angelou. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your work.

[Chris]

A unique flavor and aftertaste.