I have seen Maelstroms Eternal

I have seen Maelstroms Eternal

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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I write with flowers of ink, thy love poured out on page, in a slumbering alder away in endless flight; swaying with the stars, so white 'gainst the black night sky.

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I have seen Maelstroms Eternal
By: Adam M. Snow

I write with flowers of ink,
thy love poured out on page,
in a slumbering alder away in endless flight;
swaying with the stars, so white

'gainst the black night sky.
Facing the horizons, on the calm black waters called -ink.
-I write for thee that thy heart be free.
I have seen maelstroms eternal,
mount in my soul but endless;
-An abyss without thee, I dare thee not.
By starlight the rushes lean over thee wide:
-The ink on the page is erased,
-The text is long forgotten. 

 

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© 2013 Adam M. Snow



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I Love this Poem! thanks for the rec to read!


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As an artists I was first attacted b the picture but, it was poem that kept me here. Well done, with every word different from the last and written so well and done in your own unique way.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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DJ
A classic piece, I don't usually enjoy poetry with old english language used, but this was nicely written. Good on ya!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A classic piece again my darling you are a master!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Very classic. I see two rather disparate ideas flowing here, one of love, one of writing. Like an egg within an egg.

Posted 4 Years Ago


I love the classical style of this, and the words are so beautiful and descriptive.
Well-penned, my friend. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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NA
wow...this was hauntingly beautiful...really enjoyed :) x

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Adam M. Snow

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Lovely poem -" I write for thee that thy heart be free." I love this line it has an beautiful simple rhyme to it. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Adam M. Snow

4 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it
Powerful piece my friend, there is nothing more beautiful than you showing your message, for the one you wrote it for here, again, you almost bring me tears... fantastic wording. It's so good you're back, and I can read you again.

- Elisa

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Adam M. Snow

4 Years Ago

I am glad you enjoyed this and again, thank you for your kind review

4 Years Ago

Anytime my friend!
This is a prayer. Beautifully constructed and I am impressed beyond measure.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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