Burning

Burning

Written by Adam M. Snow

Burning;

I am burning

on my knees

-- fallen

-- praying.

Engulfing flame

burning bright,

see me now

in Holy light.

Burning;

soothing flame

embraces me.

See me now

tongue of fire,

burning bright

on my knees

-- fallen

-- praying

in utter tongue 

throughout the night;

burning words

from my lips.

Salvation come

manifest.

-- El Shaddai!

-- El Shaddai!

I am burning

engulfing flame,

in a blaze

glory-found,

burning bright

where darkness found.

See me now

engulf in flame,

Heaven's torch,

burning bright

on my knees

-- fallen

-- praying

-- humble

-- burning.

In a blaze

burning bright.

darkness flee

I ignite

-- blazing.

Burning;

I am burning

on my knees

-- fallen

-- praying.

-- El Shaddai!

-- El Shaddai!

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Author's Note

Feel free to comment, let me know what you think.

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Reviews

[Nightfeather]

The lay-out of this poem is really likable and the flow felt like a epic prayer. You should make an fantasy book or something, for your writing style is just so epic and gives each of your poems a unique flavour to it. I wonder how or when you developed such god like writing skills. This poem is a masterpiece.

Good job :D

[Adam M. Snow]

Hanging from a Blood Soaked Tree
The Fruits of Insanity
Weeping by the Willow Tree: Tales of Broken Hearts
These are the titles of 3 poetry books I'm currently working on... Again, I'm glad you enjoy my work.

[Nightfeather]

I cannot wait to read your books, I am sure that they will be of epic proportions. Good luck with writing :)

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you, I hope to have at least one of them published by the end of this year.

[Nightfeather]

I hope that you will succeed :)

[Adam M. Snow]

As do I, thank you.

[Nightfeather]

No problem :)

[marcus]

what a beautiful flow and rhythm!! I like it.

[Kay]

I love the format and style of this piece. I definitley hear panic or a rushed tone, as if someone is begging for their life. Beautifully done! :)

[T.W. Early]

The formatting gives an important frantic quality to the writing, as if someone was actually burning as they wrote it. This helped it feel more real to me. Thanks for sharing!

[Poetic Beauty]

It is amazing the feeling and thoughts come to mind when down on knees in prayer.

[Jetta Zippora]

You write so beautifully. It is majestic to read aloud and the pictures you paint with your words are epic. Brilliantly penned, my friend.

[TL Boehm]

reads very much like a prayer or a psalm. A call to Heaven. Well done.

[jennifer little]

wow great write i enjoyed reading it it was nicely written nicely worded great flow to it . ...filled with passion .. i thought it was a amazing write keep up the good work and keep on writing

[misha]

Great write. It was very unique and intriguing. Keep it up!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An interesting piece that keeps hold of the eye and does not disappoint, well done, good read.