Burning

Burning

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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Burning; I am burning on my knees -- fallen -- praying. Engulfing flame burning bright, see me now in Holy light.

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Burning
Written by Adam M. Snow

Burning;
I am burning
on my knees
-- fallen
-- praying.
Engulfing flame
burning bright,
see me now
in Holy light.

Burning;
soothing flame
embraces me.
See me now
tongue of fire,
burning bright
on my knees
-- fallen
-- praying
in utter tongue 
throughout the night;
burning words
from my lips.
Salvation come
manifest.
-- El Shaddai!
-- El Shaddai!

I am burning
engulfing flame,
in a blaze
glory-found,
burning bright
where darkness found.

See me now
engulf in flame,
Heaven's torch,
burning bright
on my knees
-- fallen
-- praying
-- humble
-- burning.
In a blaze
burning bright.
darkness flee
I ignite
-- blazing.

Burning;
I am burning
on my knees
-- fallen
-- praying.
-- El Shaddai!
-- El Shaddai!


© 2014 Adam M. Snow



Author's Note

Adam M. Snow
Feel free to comment, let me know what you think.

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The lay-out of this poem is really likable and the flow felt like a epic prayer. You should make an fantasy book or something, for your writing style is just so epic and gives each of your poems a unique flavour to it. I wonder how or when you developed such god like writing skills. This poem is a masterpiece.

Good job :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

I hope that you will succeed :)
Adam M. Snow

2 Years Ago

As do I, thank you.
Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

No problem :)



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The lay-out of this poem is really likable and the flow felt like a epic prayer. You should make an fantasy book or something, for your writing style is just so epic and gives each of your poems a unique flavour to it. I wonder how or when you developed such god like writing skills. This poem is a masterpiece.

Good job :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

I hope that you will succeed :)
Adam M. Snow

2 Years Ago

As do I, thank you.
Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

No problem :)
what a beautiful flow and rhythm!! I like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I love the format and style of this piece. I definitley hear panic or a rushed tone, as if someone is begging for their life. Beautifully done! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


The formatting gives an important frantic quality to the writing, as if someone was actually burning as they wrote it. This helped it feel more real to me. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


It is amazing the feeling and thoughts come to mind when down on knees in prayer.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You write so beautifully. It is majestic to read aloud and the pictures you paint with your words are epic. Brilliantly penned, my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

reads very much like a prayer or a psalm. A call to Heaven. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow great write i enjoyed reading it it was nicely written nicely worded great flow to it . ...filled with passion .. i thought it was a amazing write keep up the good work and keep on writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


Great write. It was very unique and intriguing. Keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An interesting piece that keeps hold of the eye and does not disappoint, well done, good read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Last Updated on October 30, 2014
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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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