Burning

Burning

Written by Adam M. Snow

Burning;

I am burning

on my knees

-- fallen

-- praying.

Engulfing flame

burning bright,

see me now

in Holy light.

Burning;

soothing flame

embraces me.

See me now

tongue of fire,

burning bright

on my knees

-- fallen

-- praying

in utter tongue 

throughout the night;

burning words

from my lips.

Salvation come

manifest.

-- El Shaddai!

-- El Shaddai!

I am burning

engulfing flame,

in a blaze

glory-found,

burning bright

where darkness found.

See me now

engulf in flame,

Heaven's torch,

burning bright

on my knees

-- fallen

-- praying

-- humble

-- burning.

In a blaze

burning bright.

darkness flee

I ignite

-- blazing.

Burning;

I am burning

on my knees

-- fallen

-- praying.

-- El Shaddai!

-- El Shaddai!

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Author's Note

Feel free to comment, let me know what you think.

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Reviews

[Nightfeather]

The lay-out of this poem is really likable and the flow felt like a epic prayer. You should make an fantasy book or something, for your writing style is just so epic and gives each of your poems a unique flavour to it. I wonder how or when you developed such god like writing skills. This poem is a masterpiece.

Good job :D

[Adam M. Snow]

Hanging from a Blood Soaked Tree
The Fruits of Insanity
Weeping by the Willow Tree: Tales of Broken Hearts
These are the titles of 3 poetry books I'm currently working on... Again, I'm glad you enjoy my work.

[Nightfeather]

I cannot wait to read your books, I am sure that they will be of epic proportions. Good luck with writing :)

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you, I hope to have at least one of them published by the end of this year.

[Nightfeather]

I hope that you will succeed :)

[Adam M. Snow]

As do I, thank you.

[Nightfeather]

No problem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the poem. Alive and filled with energy. Prays should be this way. Add a pray for Brittany Maynard. A young woman who may accept euthanasia in two day. Her story made me very sad. I believe one second of time with family is worthwhile. Need a miracle for this kind woman. A amazing poem my friend.
Coyote