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Take Flight, Dear Crow of Mine

Take Flight, Dear Crow of Mine

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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Take flight, take flight dear crow of mine. Why perch you calmly on a pine? The world we live in great design, see yourself in what life entwined.

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Take Flight, Dear Crow of Mine
Written by Adam M. Snow

Take flight, take flight dear crow of mine.
Why perch you calmly on a pine?
The world we live in great design,
see yourself in what life entwined.
Spread your wings in the divine;
take flight, take flight, dear crow of mine.

All is well and all is fine,
see how the sun to west incline,
let your feathers' flutter shine.
lift your voice, my nightly sign.
With you do I myself entwine;
go forth, take flight, dear crow of mine.

© 2016 Adam M. Snow



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A very nice poem, Adam.

Comparisons with Poe's "The Raven", yes, but also original in its own right.
I love the rhyme scheme used and the use of repetition, giving this a somewhat Elizabethan texture, something i am quite fond of as a poet myself.

Good Job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Oh to fly like a bird! An evocative write - I like it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Hello Adam, this was a very nice and calming poem. One to remember.

Posted 1 Year Ago


a lovely poem reminiscent of "Blackbird" - with that oldworld quality to it.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is a soft melodic wind, a whisper of freedom, a song of heart and soul, a love of journey...gorgeous :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed this a lot. It's a brilliant piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very nice poem, Adam.

Comparisons with Poe's "The Raven", yes, but also original in its own right.
I love the rhyme scheme used and the use of repetition, giving this a somewhat Elizabethan texture, something i am quite fond of as a poet myself.

Good Job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Why perch you calmly on a pine
And
Spread your wings in the devine.

Two of my favorite lines.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I found this poem interesting and thought provoking. ...similar to Edgar Poe s The Raven!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Amazing poetry my friend.
"With you do I myself entwine;
go forth, take flight, dear crow of mine."
Good visions and thoughts left by good words and description. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How gorgeous! I absolutely love this Adam..your choice of wording is magnificent here :)

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Adam M. Snow

1 Year Ago

Why thank you

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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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