Restless

Restless
By: Adam M. Snow

Tossing and turning;
fidgeting and yearning;
night skies are brewing;
this heart is aching;
there is no mistaking;
this love is braking.

My essence is restless;
trapped in abyss;
this pain is endless;
my hope is bliss;
I am restless.

Reviews

[Ethan Paz]

It would be cool to see what the problem was, so we can communicate with you on a deeper level. Use emotion and imagery, it will enhance poetry what words can't do otherwise. Keep up the writing. I hope to read more.