The Lighthouse

The Lighthouse
By: Adam M. Snow

Come to my lighthouse;
so that I may light your way.
Come to my lighthouse;
a place for you to stay.

Where darkness hides;
the demons flees.
For I'll provide;
and you'll be at ease.

Come to my lighthouse;
for all is welcome;
even your spouse;
and those who are numb.

Come to my lighthouse;
my friend, my child.
to a place where there is no louse;
for you are also mild.

Come to my lighthouse;
so that I may light your way.
Come to my lighthouse;
a place for you to stay.

Reviews

[Kim Brooksyn]

This was good :) . I think that after reading this, I've found some slight security in the poem and that's a good sign but it could be a little bit stronger. But either than that, I love the descriptions you've used on getting the audience a good idea of the lighthouse. It makes me feel a little adventerous.