Apparition Despair

Apparition Despair

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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My ghostly apparition doesth not be seen, by thy child of my ghostly fiend.

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Apparition Despair
By: Adam M. Snow

My ghostly apparition doesth not be seen,
by thy child of my ghostly fiend.
But though the twinkle lights despair me;
my wake be that of a lore of me.

© 2011 Adam M. Snow




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You touched feeling good within this, I love the words you chose and the simple amount of space used for the poem, just to say enough. Nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Beautiful poem!

Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice mystically , reminds me of Casper the friendly ghost. Anyways well done on a nice short sweet and interesting poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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its so sad :( aww ghostly friends how we enjoy thier company but its sad when they have to go especially when they're the only ones we have.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sad, dark, and hauntingly beautiful at the same time, all in 30 words. Amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A interesting tale in the short poem. I try to stay away from ghostly fiends or friends. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Doesth not be seen? My Ye Old English isn't very polished, but I'm pretty sure that's not a word. Like, maybe 78% sure. Or maybe 82%. Everything else is pretty solid, though.

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Posted 12 Years Ago


What aperitions haunt you my friend, wasted chances badly choosen words or love lost through a combination of both.

Whatever the reasoning I love the feeling of sadness, keep em' coming

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Posted 12 Years Ago


interesting. i like it.

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Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 5, 2011
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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

Phoenix , AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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