When True Love Dies

When True Love Dies

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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True love cries when lovers die; When the stars twinkle upon despair.

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When True Love Dies
By: Adam M. Snow

True love cries when lovers die;
When the stars twinkle upon despair.
Lovers die when true love cries;
When the scent of death taints the air.

© 2011 Adam M. Snow



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That is very sad but true.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Simply, love it. Very nice short write that says so much, with love, death, and feeling. Nice.

Posted 5 Years Ago


"Petals fall guiltily from the sky, as the evening begins to soften the sky, and slowly, ever slow, we watch the night come through." So very endearing, and even with all of your poems you use so little words and they still paint such a picture and an atmosphere about them. I love your writing style and works.

Posted 5 Years Ago


A sad poem indeed. In those few short words, it explaines [to me] that there was once a happy couple that loved eachother so much, but then later in their life, there just wasn't any spark of love, thus, they're love had died and the sent of lossing one another linggered in the air.

It was very well written, KEEP IT UP!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Love and death, is it even possible to completely explain their relationship?

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful despair if felt between the lines of this poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow can I just say wow one more time. So little words with such big voices. As when love does die the lovers do die with it letting despair enter their life as if someone had died for that love was one person and now its death into two people again. Anyways well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wow, this got me so many memories =)
Such a wonderful piece!
and my favorite too =)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Wonderous, way of wordplay!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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i've always thought that yet you made it into a beautiful prose, sad but yet so beautifully written. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ



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