When True Love Dies

When True Love Dies

By: Adam M. Snow

True love cries when lovers die;

When the stars twinkle upon despair.

Lovers die when true love cries;

When the scent of death taints the air.

Reviews

[Jenni-Chan]

That is very sad but true.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Simply, love it. Very nice short write that says so much, with love, death, and feeling. Nice.

[Ripple of Aqua]

"Petals fall guiltily from the sky, as the evening begins to soften the sky, and slowly, ever slow, we watch the night come through." So very endearing, and even with all of your poems you use so little words and they still paint such a picture and an atmosphere about them. I love your writing style and works.

[PokemonFan#1]

A sad poem indeed. In those few short words, it explaines [to me] that there was once a happy couple that loved eachother so much, but then later in their life, there just wasn't any spark of love, thus, they're love had died and the sent of lossing one another linggered in the air.

It was very well written, KEEP IT UP!

[RedInk524]

Love and death, is it even possible to completely explain their relationship?

[T.W. Early]

Beautiful despair if felt between the lines of this poem!

[Jazique]

Wow can I just say wow one more time. So little words with such big voices. As when love does die the lovers do die with it letting despair enter their life as if someone had died for that love was one person and now its death into two people again. Anyways well done.

[Sweets]

Wow, this got me so many memories =)
Such a wonderful piece!
and my favorite too =)

Wonderous, way of wordplay!

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i've always thought that yet you made it into a beautiful prose, sad but yet so beautifully written. :)