A Year of Timely Hell

A Year of Timely Hell

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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The hour cries at charming bell Bringing forth a timely hell, With sorrow and madness, and many more; Leaving upon us a deathly score.

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A Year of Timely Hell
By: Adam M. Snow

The hour cries at charming bell
Bringing forth a timely hell,
With sorrow and madness, and many more;
Leaving upon us a deathly score.
A death to live with, from a bloodshed wage
From a child of anguish and solstice rage;
Leaving us in tears of what is to come
Leaving us in ruins and in glum.
No reason to fight on,
No reason to fight strong.
Its not our life to fight for.
Its not our time to fight a war.
It is our time to die and live again,
In a life, free of this worldly sin

© 2012 Adam M. Snow



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Wow this is amazing. If it's a concrete poem, that's good too. It makes the time pass slowly.

Posted 4 Years Ago


It ain't over til its over.
This is a strong poem. we keep fighting even after the fight has left us.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I bet in a small fox hole some where on a burning smoke filled field of France, nearly a hundred years ago. someone was sitting, preying, wishing, hoping for something. but those words were ready on his lips

Posted 5 Years Ago


This was more of a rougher edge to the natural darkness you alway speek about but none the less imaginative.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Yay for rhyming couplet!

It was a great Poem!

KEEP IT UP!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very dark and gloomy. Really excellent on strong emotion and emphasis.

Posted 5 Years Ago


That is a old photo. The old wars were terrible. Where thousand of men would died in seconds taking a beach. I lost family in Asia and in Europe. Their memories stayed with my Grandmother till her death. A powerful poem. Soldiers died and wars never stop. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


This seems so powerful, not much for me to say because it just sort of blew my mind in some way... well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


actually this might be a well penned poem but it was also such a amazing concept as well.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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your poems are great period! or exclamation points!!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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