Ah, the perfection that relates within the piece, it reflects the thoughts of young lovers, though emotion can not by itself have forgotten time, you tend to relate it more and more and more again, well done, good read.
I loved this poem can I truly so i loved this poem, I reall like the whole 'Do I wake or do I dream. Do I live or do I die" and especiall "I am caged until i am free". Your words really just spoke as you writtten them in such a poem a to reach a certian point of achievment or destiney for then you can for tell what you will do as to live or die or speak or to not. Its like shakespeare in quote but, a different in briliance of your writings. So whether or not I'm making since; I just wanted to say I truly to like this poem and i can barely explain why but, it brought a smile to my thoughts and I say thank you and well done for such a wonderful job.
"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow
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