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Solstice Night

Solstice Night

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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Once upon a solstice night, As she broad a distance sight. Leaving behind her spoken voice As she waits the world by choice.

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Solstice Night 
By: Adam M. Snow 

Once upon a solstice night,
As she broad a distance sight.
Leaving behind her spoken voice 
As she waits the world by choice.
One scarlet night abroad the tower,
She lies to wait a night devour.
As truth be told she lies awake,
Dreaming of her knightly sake.
Burden be her heart dost sing, 
"O to thee what morrow brings?"
She lies there by the window pane,
Silent forevermore and forever insane.

© 2012 Adam M. Snow



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Nice voice in this, it's solmen and it speaks volumes.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Caged and longing the poor maiden is. Yet through her tragedy we see the beauty.

Posted 5 Years Ago


**Squealing with happyness** Yay! I love poems that rhyme! I loved it so, so, so, SO much!
Keep it up!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This just reminds me of someone who's waiting and waiting for someone. But either can't have them or haven't found them. She's lonely to the point where it's painful, and she doesn't know exactly what to do. So she waits and waits for this lover, until she goes insane.

-Marie Riorden-

Posted 5 Years Ago


Very Good! I LOVE IT!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is amaing. Its deep and emotionally raw.

I give it two thumbs up :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Well you lil Shakespearin...awww dreaming of that night in shiny armor..
Made me think of Romeo and Juliet
Great discriptions and even more the images...Wonderful

Posted 5 Years Ago


There is so much I can type about this but the words refuse to budge from my puny mind. So then here is a random comment. In the format this is in there is vivid picture in my head that completely grasps line after line.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Love this... sort of reminds me of a damsel in distress with the lady in the tower and the knight to her rescue, or a smile Romeo and Juliet. Very nice write.

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Posted 5 Years Ago


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cool reminds me of rapunzel or more like a sleeping beauty, wow so beautifully written it makes me smile to read such a beautiful poem on my day :)

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Posted 5 Years Ago



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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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