Solstice Night

Solstice Night 

By: Adam M. Snow 

Once upon a solstice night,

As she broad a distance sight.

Leaving behind her spoken voice 

As she waits the world by choice.

One scarlet night abroad the tower,

She lies to wait a night devour.

As truth be told she lies awake,

Dreaming of her knightly sake.

Burden be her heart dost sing, 

"O to thee what morrow brings?"

She lies there by the window pane,

Silent forevermore and forever insane.

Reviews

[tynamite]

Nice voice in this, it's solmen and it speaks volumes.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Caged and longing the poor maiden is. Yet through her tragedy we see the beauty.

[PokemonFan#1]

**Squealing with happyness** Yay! I love poems that rhyme! I loved it so, so, so, SO much!
Keep it up!

[Miss Marie Riorden.]

This just reminds me of someone who's waiting and waiting for someone. But either can't have them or haven't found them. She's lonely to the point where it's painful, and she doesn't know exactly what to do. So she waits and waits for this lover, until she goes insane.

-Marie Riorden-

[Serenity]

Very Good! I LOVE IT!!!

[James Maines]

This is amaing. Its deep and emotionally raw.

I give it two thumbs up :)

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Well you lil Shakespearin...awww dreaming of that night in shiny armor..
Made me think of Romeo and Juliet
Great discriptions and even more the images...Wonderful

[Raven Starhawk]

There is so much I can type about this but the words refuse to budge from my puny mind. So then here is a random comment. In the format this is in there is vivid picture in my head that completely grasps line after line.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Love this... sort of reminds me of a damsel in distress with the lady in the tower and the knight to her rescue, or a smile Romeo and Juliet. Very nice write.

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cool reminds me of rapunzel or more like a sleeping beauty, wow so beautifully written it makes me smile to read such a beautiful poem on my day :)