This just reminds me of someone who's waiting and waiting for someone. But either can't have them or haven't found them. She's lonely to the point where it's painful, and she doesn't know exactly what to do. So she waits and waits for this lover, until she goes insane.
Well you lil Shakespearin...awww dreaming of that night in shiny armor..
Made me think of Romeo and Juliet
Great discriptions and even more the images...Wonderful
There is so much I can type about this but the words refuse to budge from my puny mind. So then here is a random comment. In the format this is in there is vivid picture in my head that completely grasps line after line.
Love this... sort of reminds me of a damsel in distress with the lady in the tower and the knight to her rescue, or a smile Romeo and Juliet. Very nice write.
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