Life without a Life

Life without a Life

A Poem by Adam M. Snow

A feeling expressed without even a word, A word without a voice spoken. A heart without a beating of life,

Life without a Life
By: Adam M. Snow

A feeling expressed without even a word,
A word without a voice spoken.
A heart without a beating of life,
Or a life without a feeling of bliss.
What of a weary somber?
But a life without a life.

© 2012 Adam M. Snow

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This is my favorite by you so far! As before, perfect picture!
Keep it up!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Well penned. There is existing and then there is living. This poem speaks to that.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wow deep as it all connected as without one another what are they and I just love philosophy thought of "But a life without a life." Honestly interesting and excellent job as think of such interesting things in on circle loop of words.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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yup the souless eyes that lurk and wander, :( sad but beautifully written :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

The feeling is so real. Everyone who feel lost might be feeling this way. Great write. Love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Interesting short poem... enjoyed the thought in this.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Funny thing this life malarky is! Damn funny. None of us every really get the hang of it. And then, pffff, we are released back into the atomic soup. MY feeling is that life exists for us to write about it. What better reason for the universe to exist? And if we are living without a life does that mean that we can't die, as we don't have a life to lose?

Posted 6 Years Ago

This is such a creative poem Adam. It really makes sence too. The way it is written is amazing. Its very good and I loved it.
Keep it up!
(P.s. You always chose the right picture for your poems!)

Posted 6 Years Ago

I read this and feel it deep within. It has a life that instantly connects to my own.

Posted 6 Years Ago

That would be a miserable life without the feel of joy, love and excitement. You get the thought and emotions across in a few short lines.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on January 24, 2012
Last Updated on January 24, 2012
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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

Glendale, AZ

"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..


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