Night of Yore

Night of Yore 

By: Adam M. Snow 

Speak softly so my heart can hear, 

Of your voice and make it clear. 

I don't have time to bicker and sing, 

But o'er thy voice, a bell dost ring. 

Charming away solstice night of yore; 

Ticking away more and more. 

The dawn of age will come to pass; 

Speak now and make it last. 

Speak now while moments endeavor, 

Because nothing on Earth, lasts forever. 

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Wow, very nice... you have a way with words where the reader (or at least me) is taken into the words and imagery as we (I) read your work.

[Jamillet]

*drools* that was awesome! I'm such fanatic for your pen and writings!

[Ripple of Aqua]

Such a soothing and inviting read. Like the fog of morning as we wake. Very well done Adam.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Again, perfect structure and simplicity

[PerlySunflower]

This was I loved from beginning to end. Love the soft flow
yes..nothing (on Earth) last forever

[Coyote Poetry]

"Because nothing on Earth, lasts forever. "
Wisdom and thoughts create by your poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Raven Starhawk]

Lovely. You make poetry a new kind of art. Or perhaps it is just your mighty pen that makes it that way. In any case this was a great read that promises perfect inspiration.

[Renée J. Martin]

Softly I say...huzzah.. Well done Sir Snow !