I like the rhyming pattern and the way that it is styled. It is a very deep poem that although short gets the point across, and holds like I said a very deep meaning to it... It's a very beautiful piece, well written, and like most of your poems it was short sweet and to the point which I really liked about it.
Short but perfectly sweet. The way you write adds a completely different message to the piece and gives the sense of a much deeper, much maturer subject. Very inspiring!
oh my..this is so good..short but packed with such depth..
The dreamer in me has died a time or two..thankfull I find strength..a renewed strength to ressurect my dreams and make new.
Wonderful poem
"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow
I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..