Thief

Thief

A Poem by Soma-ko
"

Don't forget to check your pulse, love at first sight is deadly.

"

Walking down the porcelain steps,

Her smile radiated throughout the room.

Her cordial gestures,

Enticed my soul.

 

The playful gleam timidly hid in her eyes,

They sought attention,

And received nothing less.

 

I checked my pulse,

And not a beat was found.

For she had stolen my heart,

And I had not her's yet.

 

An affable smile spread across my lips,

As I made my way toward her...

 

© 2013 Soma-ko


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You did an excellent job at describing the feelings behind love at first sight. The heart metaphor was dead-on. I love the affable smile.. gentle and gracious, the kind of smile that sucks you in. I don't think this intriguing lady stands a chance against the protagonist of this tale. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Soma-ko

10 Years Ago

Haha, I sure hope so; I believe the protagonist has a few tricks up his sleeves, so I'm sure he'll b.. read more



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Simply wonderful...you did a great job with this...really enjoyed :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

10 Years Ago

Thank you, and I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)
You did an excellent job at describing the feelings behind love at first sight. The heart metaphor was dead-on. I love the affable smile.. gentle and gracious, the kind of smile that sucks you in. I don't think this intriguing lady stands a chance against the protagonist of this tale. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

10 Years Ago

Haha, I sure hope so; I believe the protagonist has a few tricks up his sleeves, so I'm sure he'll b.. read more
I enjoyed your words and liked the ending too...yes thats how you can tell when someone steals your heart....
you freeze and can't breathe haa...I remember that feeling...Rose

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soma-ko

10 Years Ago

I regret my inquires now, hopefully in the future I'll draw something nice enough to show you. (I'll.. read more
SyberRose

10 Years Ago

Alright...great.
RainbowBangles

10 Years Ago

Really nice... And the ending. was awesome..

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Added on May 22, 2013
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Tags: Love at first sight, Heart, Thief, Playful, Soma

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