Two Lovers

Have we met?...

A faint memory, so blurred,
Like a fogged up window.
Her lips so smooth and tender,
Evokes a evanescent feeling of emptiness.

A love so light, like a feather,
Is blown by the wind, never to be seen again.
Two souls intertwined so, they cannot depart,
An incessant spiral of love, abruptly interrupted.

She sways with such grace,
dancing, like a drifting leaf.
Unaware of the feelings of lost,
that continues to plague her heart.

She has forgotten me, as I, her.
Two blissful lovers, who feel so incomplete.
Completely oblivious to a fate they both seek.
Perhaps there'll be a day, when we once again meet.

Reviews

[sonnetmoon]

This poem has rendered me speechless... all I can say that this poem is a work of art. Your last stanza ' she has forgotten me,as I , her.
two blissful lovers, who feel so incomplete.
completely oblivious to a fate they both seek.
perhaps there'll be a day , when we once again meet'

I am definitely adding this poem to my library. Please write more you are extremely talented.

-sonnetmoon

[Soma-ko]

Thank you so much, and I definitely plan on writing more. :)

[SyberRose]

I thought you said yesterday you didnt like this style...this was stunning Soma...I really loved it...Rose

[Soma-ko]

Do you mean the Pablo Neruda's poem thing? I thought it was a certain format, like a sonnet or haiku, that you had to follow... I should probably read his poem now. Thank you, and I'm glad you like it. :)

[SyberRose]

No it wasn't a format...you should hear Madonna recite it on the internet...it is more beautiful than just reading it....its called...Do not forget me.

[Soma-ko]

Will do. :)

[NA]

Oh so very beautifully...really enjoyed :)

[Soma-ko]

Thank you, glad you enjoyed. :)