Maybe One Day.

Maybe One Day.

A Poem by Somer
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Maybe one day it'll be true.

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I'm talking to you,
oh what do I do?
Your words so sweet,
they lift me off my feet!

Your humor is amazing,
I crack up every time,
I wish I could hear your real voice,
oh how I imagine it's sound.

But it'll never happen,
it's a dream within a dream,
you're over there,
with her, not with me.

But oh, how I wish,
how I wish for the day,
when I finally get to see you,
finally get to see your face!

See your lips,
move as you talk,
listen to your laugh,
bellow so loud the world rocks.

When that day comes,
I'll make sure it's true,
I'll make you realize,
that I really truly want you...

© 2011 Somer


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Amazing--really is! There is lots of stuff like this around, but this is unique!
The first two stanzas rock! A slight problem in the second one though, -- ‘they llift me’,
Once that is changed, this will be perfect. I'm giving it a well derserved 100/100.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A fantastic uplifting poem that reminds me of times I really liked someone and felt this way. Hope to feel that way again. Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is cute. (: really touched me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know that feeling... Amazing writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heart touching write, enjoyed reading this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really awesome poem!! I liked itt a lot and it just kinda got to me!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, I've been here and felt that. I liked it. Kudos!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing--really is! There is lots of stuff like this around, but this is unique!
The first two stanzas rock! A slight problem in the second one though, -- ‘they llift me’,
Once that is changed, this will be perfect. I'm giving it a well derserved 100/100.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very sweet and something i believe everyone can relate to :) great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a beautiful poem and it really touches a heart. Whoever you wrote this for (if you did write it for someone) is a lucky person indeed... Esspecially to have you care so deeply for him.... Excellent write and a favorite for my box.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Somer
Somer

Canada



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Hey I'm Somer, I'm 16 years old, I'm from Canada! Where the igloo's are ;) I love to read and write! I've read a lot of books, so if you need any suggestions ask me :) I also love horseback riding.. more..

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