Sorry.

Sorry.

A Poem by Somer
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Just a poem .

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The emptiness is killing me,
I feel so out of place,
I miss talking to you,
and the things you'd say.

The words I said lurk in my mind,
I regret saying them everyday,
I wish I could take them back,
or at least told you to stay.

You kept me together,
even when I didn't know,
I thought I didn't need you,
When really...I couldn't be more wrong.

I refused to put my guard down,
and that caused a fuss,
I told you to go away,
that we shouldn't speak, I didn't trust.

But now hun, oh how I see,
that you were always there for me,
never were you gone, you always talked to me,
your love was so strong, I was so weak.

I shouldn't have pushed you away,
I regret it to this day,
my words were stupid,
I'm sorry, okay?

Three months have gone by,
and I'm waitintg for you,
I shouldn't have pushed you away.
I should have thought it through.

© 2011 Somer


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Somer
Not my best, a poem I wrote :P

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This is good! :) Honest!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think this is lovely. an honest apology.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great poem as it says how the subject in the poem has regrets for pushing their significant other away. A place that I can whole-heartedly relate to at this exact point. Why did you think it's not your best?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am crying Somer......

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emotional write, like it alot

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked it :) nice job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Somer

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Hey I'm Somer, I'm 16 years old, I'm from Canada! Where the igloo's are ;) I love to read and write! I've read a lot of books, so if you need any suggestions ask me :) I also love horseback riding.. more..

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