Do You?

This will take you into a different world

      Do You?

There are billions of people in this world,

You and I are just the one.

There are eight planets in our solar system,

Our planet is just the one.

There are 10 millions solar systems in our galaxy,

Our solar system is just the one.

There are 100 zillions galaxies in the universe,

Our galaxy is just the one.

As the counts goes on and on….

Today I am here standing on my feet,

Questioning myself where am I ?

Today’s generation has lost the war.

The war between two hearts,

And some ego that kills us the most.

But do you ever question yourself?

What it’s all meant to be?

But do you ever question yourself?

70 years ago people at your age died at the war?

But do ever question yourself?

Am i dead in the battle of hearts?

But do you ever question yourself?

How I will feel a weak later?

Dark times are meant to pass,

The most powerful thing about time is that it changes.

Do you ever question yourself?

Do you?

                                                  Written by. Soumyadeep Kundu

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Do You?

Reviews

[Inda]

This is fantastic! The use of repetition is perfect and it makes for a powerful write.
"How I will feel a weak later?"
Here i think you meant a "week". Other than that it's perfect!

[Somu]

yes that's week*. although thanks for the review:)

[B]

Its been said that one rises in existence
through the questions
they ask themselves
when no one is around
and nothing matters ..... this is a pretty existential piece

[Somu]

thanks :) for the review

[Mr.Writer]

Very great aspect you've shown us :) I haven't thought like this to be honest :)
I don't question myself :D
I've forgotten that planet earth isn't the only planet :D
Very nice poem!!

[Somu]

thanks you :)