Hearts

​We’re broken souls
With tied up hearts
Trying to find love
Distances apart
We’re damaged goods
To bear the pain
Shattered in pieces
Irreplaceable again
So what will this mighty brain do?
When our hearts
Beating inside our wrecked bodies
Are torn into two

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

must consider this poetry certainly one of my fav. as it's absolutely seemed to be so tucked up with beautiful love-hurt-norms. kinda very honest, & heartfelt yet so realistic poetry you've come up with. rhythmic patter's quite fascinating as well. enjoyed this to the fullest.

looking forward to reading your work!

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :) I appreciate your comment.

[lua]

this is a very moving piece, the idea of irreversible heartbreak and the inevitable heartbreak to come

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much. Your feedback means a lot to me :)