Heal

Here is a piece I wrote about rejection and love.

I am so abstemious in your love,
Your soul and words give me gentle feels.
Yet your baleful looks convey a no,
But one day I know I'll definitely heal.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated and welcomed!

Reviews

[Sofia]

Hey! I saw in the comments that this poem has got the best writers cafe poem award. This was expected as in a few sentences you expressed what you felt about rejection and love. Its such a lovely poem. I guess its one of your best poems and a favourite of mine too :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you very much! 😍😍

[Sofia]

You deserved it :)

[Quill]

Hello Sonakshi didi!I found that this poem has been awarded the best Writer'sCafe poem on the DPS site!Congratulations to you..such a beautiful and touching poem!The vocabulary simply melts my heart...!

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thanks Mohor! Great finding you here :D

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Wonderfully said. Something we can all relate to, or at least most. How can something sad be said so beautifully? I wish we could receive such rejection with such grace as these words! Tyfs.

- Cyprian

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you so much :) It would be great if you could check out my other works as well.
Cheers!

[Najam Us Saher]

It's always good to have hope. Be strong.

[Sonakshi Arora]

True... I completely agree.