Break Down

And sometimes, even the strongest ones break down

Have you ever broken down
When things don't seem in place
Have you ever felt so tired
When everything has lost its pace
Have you ever drowned so deep?
That you couldn't come and float
Have you ever been such a wreck
And seemed to be trapped in a sinking boat
Have you ever been hurt so much
When you just lost your strong
Have you fallen so many times
That even right seems like wrong

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is always appreciated!

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I think I am currently in such a situation and at precise time you have posted this. I feel so low to write anything and you have written such a beautiful poem which I can relate with now. Amazing. Well done. It feels so relaxing when one can relate with.

[Sonakshi Arora]

Thank you! Is everything alright? Feel free to share :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah sure :) Thank you for asking.

[boygene borice]

I have so many times been broken, trampled upon, discouraged and felt like giving up. Sometimes life is just like a game, you may win,sometimes you may fail but the one hope is that,never remain there when you fail,rise up and head for your destiny

[Sonakshi Arora]

I completely agree with you :D