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Something i wrote off the top of my head

 She walked out into the Summer air. She could feel the wind on her face and presence of Mother Nature all around her. The trees towered over letting beams of sunlight shoot through. She sat down under a mighty oak. The grass was swaying back and forth to the rhythm of the wind. It felt as if the world was for once at peace. With all its living things, in perfect Harmony. She knew it couldn't last forever so she sat there in silence, closed her eyes, and savored every last moment of it....

Reviews

[What happened to simple..]

I love your writing, it flows incredily, short snippets of memories flashed back to others. Pretty damn cool, and beautiful descriptions.

[Hachamecha]

:D

[aurooras flame]

nice thought and a good consept

[Walk away slow poet]

Wonderfully written. enjoyed this

[Nihilum]

Beautiful. All your writing is beautiful

[Danielleღ]

Amazing and inspiring write.

[emma]

really nice job. you painted a beautiful picture with your words, and i felt like i was really there.

[ColourMyLife]

I think this title is perfect. Untitled. It truly is untitled. Ou can never describe suh a strong feeling in words. Yet you've done it perfectly. Wonderful.

[*** Hey Jude***]

What a beautiful portrayal of creations verve. In this 'extreme" world I love the place you take me to with serenity shared in this write Very nice! ~ Jude

PS I really like your username! Perfection is impossible, it is our imperfection that make us beautiful!

[Kavish S.M]

You really drew in the beauty of Nature in this poem .. The imagery, the motion, the Harmony, Peace and again, all the little details (which you are really good at) you put in really brings a perfect image of Nature. Great write.