Ocean

Theres something about the blue ocean that makes it so inviting

Makes it looks so peaceful and beautiful with its blue-green waters resting under the light of the sun

Plunging into the salty sea, I Instantly feel that weightlessness sensation.

I often wonder what secrets this mysterious paradise keeps hidden.

From its untamable waves that crash up against the shore, to the seemingly endless horizon and slow setting sun.

All it's strange and unique creatures that dwell above and beneath the surface.

Some are the monsters of the deep that haunt our nightmares with their terrorizing features and the nature of their being

Yet others take our breath away with thier stunning colors and their cleverly decorative designs that shing under the sun.

Coming out of the water i layed down with the warmth of the sun beating down on my sun-kissed back. Closing my eyes, i listen to the music that that this delicate place seemed to produce. As i opened my eyes, i saw the gracefull rulers of the sky glide across the brilliant blue heavens.

The ocean is a place of mystery. I hope to one day obtain some of its secrets as i walk the sandy shoreline, gaze out at the horizon, and slow;y drift away...

Reviews

[Backlight Burner]

Amazing!!

[Michael of Gilead]

Nothing like the vastness of the ocean to put one's self in perspective.

[Myself]

This is a lovely, peaceful, and calming poem. You drew the reader into the poem with great ease. I could see the ocean and feel the warmth of the sun. Great Write!

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

great very descriptive

[Jamillet]

*sighs* i'd like to see the wonders of the ocean myself but due to the water pressure i'll end up flatter then a pancake -.-

[xxDEMONxx]

Beautiful

[Raven Starhawk]

A truly delightful read that the soul can embrace. It has heart as well and a sense of direction that doesn't disappoint.

[Emily Burns]

lovely

[akira_chan]

now i'm also wondering about the secret of the watery paradise :)

[GreenAngle]

Wow, i know exactly how you feel. This is a very moving poem and i love it a lot! It's very beautiful and you've chosen your words well. Keep it up. =)