Digit

Digit

A Poem by Sophster300
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This is a poem about my beloved dog, Digit, who does now longer live with us...as we had to find a new home for him, he may have moved destination, but in my heart he shall stay forever xoxoxox

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Digit.

 

 

You are a lovely dog

My three legged friend

And I'm so sad that our friendship

Came to an end

But it wasn’t you’re fault

And it wasn’t mine

No it was the neighbour’s

That measly swine

She called the council

And made a complaint

Oh boy how she made a big mistake

As we all knew something, that’s for sure

That she had done a whole lot more

Than love a dog, ‘cause she hated them

She had to move out

That lousy trout

Life was a hell lot better then

But I cried extremely hard when

I found out that you had to go

Oh digit how I miss you so

You lit up the room, you made it glow

And that just really goes to show

How good you were

You made things better

When times were dull

You spread smiles and glitter.

© 2011 Sophster300


Author's Note

Sophster300
I know I could of made it longer...but nevermind. Please give me ways to improve :) x

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Thanks Rachi, I know the flow gets a bit iffy towards the middle..xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


it is really good it goes very deep
Make sure you use a capital for Digit (its a noun)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Sophster300
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Warrington, United Kingdom



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