sdrawkcaBackwards

sdrawkcaBackwards

A Poem by Marlena
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.meop evol sdrawkcab A

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sdrawkcaB

 

teef ym ffo em peews uoy dniw a ekiL

modeerf ruoy ni gnikaos m'I evaw a ekiL

uoy evol always lliw I eveileb I dnA

nword ton lliw I eveileb I dnA

llew os miws t'nac I hguoht nevE

dna nwod edispu dna pu twisted lla m'I hguoht nevE

Backwards.

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Like a wind you sweep me off my feet

Like a wave I’m soaking in your freedom

And I believe I will always love you

And I believe I will not drown

Even though I can’t swim so well

Even though I’m all twisted up and upside down and

Backwards.

 

.sdrawkcaB

 

© 2010 Marlena


Author's Note

Marlena
....
That took FOREVER.

Got the idea from someone off DA, but added my own touch to make it my own~

Enjoy :)

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love it! great poem and relatively simple to read. i liked that you included the forwards version as well. ^_^ however in the third line, you spelled "always" out the right way. and you spelled "twisted" out the right way in the 6th line too. did you mean to do that?

Posted 13 Years Ago


that was amazing unique and just plain awesome. It took me forever to read the first part though. I love the layout and the poem itsself great job.


Posted 13 Years Ago


hahahahaha took me a little while to read x] but I like it! adds a twist that demands attention :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


fun little poem, and interesting layout
give it an esoteric feel, very manic
thumbs up

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very different. Great job though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I thought that was interesting. I wouldn't have the patience to do that. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's awesome! Really unique, great job. I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's cool! I don't know how you could sit there and type everything backwards. I'd probably get to the second word, and just decide to stop. Maybe I'm ADHD. Who knows? But this was awesome! Sweet, and totally cool! Great job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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