Elements Calling

Elements Calling

A Poem by *** Hey Jude***
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Could not sleep, and was listening to the rain outside my window to 'find" rest. This is a thought that went through my head. Original 2.03.2012

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© 2012 *** Hey Jude***



Author's Note

*** Hey Jude***
I could not figure out a way to use this font I thought was neat. So I took a picture and then posted as if a picture. I overlapped, and 2 lines are repeated. Will fix later. Must catch a few zzz's :-)


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Simply beautiful poetry. I can see why so many commented on this. The font adds to its unique beauty. Wonderful job.

Pendragon

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*** Hey Jude***

8 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind thoughts! I appreciate you stopping by for a read! ~ :-)
Penwriter

8 Months Ago

:)
'Heaven's nectar falling' is my favourite line .. we all need a little of that to come our way to keep us going.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*** Hey Jude***

8 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping by Ron! Your thoughts are very appreciated! Yes, the rain , the elements "dra.. read more
Those last three lines are a truly sudden and welcome pause in the day.. like a brief prayer .. a bandage of life inside and out.. You're a wonder, honey bun, you really are!

(( Yes, beautiful font, how come you're so clever, missus?! :) ))

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*** Hey Jude***

8 Months Ago

Yes, a prayer from the Soul answered! T''was as if I was spoken to in the words I "scribbled". You m.. read more
Each raindrop dear Jude has a message, you're one who spoke that out too... rain is beautiful, and refreshing, as your poem... the message wrapped in the arms of your love, is even better.

Thank you for spreading your words.

E.L.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*** Hey Jude***

9 Months Ago

{{{Eli}}, you are a Beautiful person inside, and out! I hope when in need or want these words wrap y.. read more
The font is lovely, but not nearly as lovely as the words that you play your melody of love in for us - your symphony of peace, and love and sweet release! The cadence of the raindrops is a sound so very pleasing to my ear........ Ah, all is so very beautiful, as is your soul my dear S.I.S.!!!!! Thank you for sharing YOU with US!!!
p.s. What is the font my dear friend?

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*** Hey Jude***

9 Months Ago

I am glad you like the font as well! I hope this "scribble" rocks you to sleep as it did, and does m.. read more
Heavenly rain , beautiful write , the font too lovely adds to the piece .

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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*** Hey Jude***

9 Months Ago

You are so very kind! I am glad you enjoyed this! I wanted to share the serenity! ~ ♥ :-)'s
I don't know what to write, that hasn't already been written ..
This is simply and naturally beautiful .. ..

Jasmine ..

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*** Hey Jude***

10 Months Ago

Sweetest {{{Jas}}}, Thank you so much. Your presence is felt, and appreciated more than you can imag.. read more
J. J.  Nightingale

10 Months Ago

((HUGS))) .. ..
Beautiful... gorgeous presentation.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*** Hey Jude***

10 Months Ago

Thank you Sharon, I appreciate your you kind thoughts! ~ :-)

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