The Station

The Station

A Poem by Soundz
"

I don't like work :/ One of my best poems though!

"

The Station

Tim McCollum


Designed to return where they relay

Concepts questionably perverted,

Which truly lose sight of the blaze

From perversion’s constant burn.

 

People are crazy,

Cautious they could’ve,

Bet if they weren’t lazy.

They don’t know the feeling of Free.

 

But how could we know?

The flames won’t drop for them to see.

Can loveable banter,

coupled with good manner tell us this?

 

There’s no right, rather wrought answers.

 

Things are as they are.

They see them as they aren’t.

Can I be me and them not see

The person long ago I sought?

 

Trick is to never know

Things you aren’t or can’t control.

Be you, but only care for that.

The station waits for me…

 

…at least I can wear a hat. 


© 2017 Soundz



Author's Note

Soundz
This is a deep one...not a on-the-surface kinda poem.

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"Concepts questionably perverted," Yaasss!

"People are crazy,
Cautious they could’ve,
Bet if they weren’t lazy.
They don’t know the feeling of Free."

Preach, Bro. Soundz, preach!

Why do you need a hat? Is it so that:

"Can I be me and them not see
The person long ago I sought?"

I am not a poet and the Cafe has been kind to me regarding my meager efforts ( I will try anything once!), so sometimes I struggle. I am such a plebeian in matters of form, etc. but I'm smart and can usually "get" it. And if I don't, I will c**k my head to the side like a good puppy and you'll hear me say "huh?" Many have told me that they would rather each reader glean what they will for themselves...hmmph! So, if you have a specific meaning, please tell me so that I can learn and eventually one day, extrapolate with the upper echelons about such esoteric matters. *ahem*

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soundz

3 Months Ago

Hi Carol,
Thank you for the appreciation!!
It's a poem on the lack of appreciation f.. read more
Carol Cashes

3 Months Ago

WELL!! Did not know about the hat rule. I would have understood the ending as the perfect end to t.. read more
Carol Cashes

3 Months Ago

WELL!! Did not know about the hat rule. I would have understood the ending as the perfect end to t.. read more



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"Concepts questionably perverted," Yaasss!

"People are crazy,
Cautious they could’ve,
Bet if they weren’t lazy.
They don’t know the feeling of Free."

Preach, Bro. Soundz, preach!

Why do you need a hat? Is it so that:

"Can I be me and them not see
The person long ago I sought?"

I am not a poet and the Cafe has been kind to me regarding my meager efforts ( I will try anything once!), so sometimes I struggle. I am such a plebeian in matters of form, etc. but I'm smart and can usually "get" it. And if I don't, I will c**k my head to the side like a good puppy and you'll hear me say "huh?" Many have told me that they would rather each reader glean what they will for themselves...hmmph! So, if you have a specific meaning, please tell me so that I can learn and eventually one day, extrapolate with the upper echelons about such esoteric matters. *ahem*

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soundz

3 Months Ago

Hi Carol,
Thank you for the appreciation!!
It's a poem on the lack of appreciation f.. read more
Carol Cashes

3 Months Ago

WELL!! Did not know about the hat rule. I would have understood the ending as the perfect end to t.. read more
Carol Cashes

3 Months Ago

WELL!! Did not know about the hat rule. I would have understood the ending as the perfect end to t.. read more
I enjoyed the honest thoughts and I agree with them.
"Things are as they are.
They see them as they aren’t.
Can I be me and them not see
The person long ago I sought? "
Easy to forget who we were. Sometimes we must re-gather our life and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soundz

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much man! Feels good :D
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
I LOVE your work! I love how deep and real this is. People try to fit in a mold the society has made. They have to make their own mold, as it's their best fit. Love the rhyme, too. Keep it up!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soundz

3 Months Ago

I greatly appreciate your words my friend. This one I made out of anger, but the message means so mu.. read more
Jana Omar

3 Months Ago

Welcomed anytime :)

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Added on September 5, 2017
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Tags: Work, Hardship, Self, New Age

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Soundz
Soundz

Raleigh, NC



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