The Divinity

The Divinity

A Poem by Soundz
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This one is short, not to put the subject simply, but rather to elicit as much inspiration as I feel from it.

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The Divinity

Tim McCollum

 

They always care.

Controlling forever can’t be.

Staring up to climb heaven’s stairs,

And missing heaven’s backyard trees


© 2017 Soundz



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Soundz
I appreciate any feedback :)

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Learning to be happy with what you have lends the greatest peace and contentment. As humans, we tend to have our heads in the clouds, ignoring the earth beneath our feet. Nature is its own sort of religion, with the earth as its temple. I love the saying, "Nature is my church. Love is my religion."

The last two lines are stellar!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soundz

2 Months Ago

Thank you Linda :)
I believe the meaning of life is to appreciate life.
Those lines h.. read more



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Learning to be happy with what you have lends the greatest peace and contentment. As humans, we tend to have our heads in the clouds, ignoring the earth beneath our feet. Nature is its own sort of religion, with the earth as its temple. I love the saying, "Nature is my church. Love is my religion."

The last two lines are stellar!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soundz

2 Months Ago

Thank you Linda :)
I believe the meaning of life is to appreciate life.
Those lines h.. read more
Always in two minds with religion.
Though that might be me just hedging my bets.
Just always seems to be to much riches around religion.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Soundz

2 Months Ago

I use the line, "Staring up to climb heaven's stairs," to reference the current massive religions. T.. read more

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Added on September 26, 2017
Last Updated on September 26, 2017
Tags: New Age, Religion, Peace, Presence

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Soundz
Soundz

Raleigh, NC



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