The Divinity

This one is short, not to put the subject simply, but rather to elicit as much inspiration as I feel from it.

The Divinity

Tim McCollum

 

They always care.

Controlling forever can’t be.

Staring up to climb heaven’s stairs,

And missing heaven’s backyard trees. 

Author's Note

I appreciate any feedback :)

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Learning to be happy with what you have lends the greatest peace and contentment. As humans, we tend to have our heads in the clouds, ignoring the earth beneath our feet. Nature is its own sort of religion, with the earth as its temple. I love the saying, "Nature is my church. Love is my religion."

The last two lines are stellar!

[Soundz]

Thank you Linda :)
I believe the meaning of life is to appreciate life.
Those lines have the most impact in this one for sure.

[Paul Bell]

Always in two minds with religion.
Though that might be me just hedging my bets.
Just always seems to be to much riches around religion.

[Soundz]

I use the line, "Staring up to climb heaven's stairs," to reference the current massive religions. Then I use the line, "And missing heaven's backyard trees." to show my enjoyment of my idea of heaven