Into the Haze

Into the Haze

A Poem by Sourav

You walk

And walk alone

Suddenly find yourself

Into the haze-

You tremble

You shiver

But do not stop

Because you don’t know how to-

You’re not in your control

And who controls you-

Is beyond you.


And you walk

And walk through the mist

Hoping to go clear

A little bit of sunrise

That is all you need

But your nemesis-

Manages to exceed

One more time,

And slowly you dissolve into the haze.

© 2017 Sourav

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I like the ending, 'And slowly you dissolve into the haze'. I see this as the anxiety dissipating. And it is true that a walk often makes one feel better. But I have a feeling that you use the word, walk, as a metaphore. If so, for what? I would love to know.

Posted 9 Months Ago

I think we all do this at times. Push it to the limit. Keep pushing it. Till you can push no more.

Posted 10 Months Ago

I'm sure there are many interpretations for this. I see anxiety and fear as possible culprits for such an occurrance. I've had anxiety attacks in the past. They're no fun.

Posted 10 Months Ago

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Added on September 1, 2017
Last Updated on September 1, 2017
Tags: poem, short poem, poetry, life, poem about life




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