Kiss me ,Kill me

A tragedy that's built on destiny
It left you with everything but
Blood from the knife that I cut your heart out with
Now relax, close your eyes, what comes next is the surprise

This valentine is doomed
The smell of blood has filled this room
If I could do it all again
I would change most every single thing

I would let you

Kiss me
Kill me
Your kiss is torture
But killing me would be too easy

Our tragedy
Seems to be killing everything it sees
Like death itself

This valentine still looms
In the darkest hour, the killing moon
If I could do it all again

I would let you

Kiss me
Kill me
Your kiss is torture
But killing me would be too easy

Kiss me (You're all I'm wanting)
Kill me (This feeling's haunting)
Your kiss is torture
But killing me would be too easy

Killing me would be too easy

Your eyes unwind the tragedy of our lives
My eyes went blind
Believe when I say

Hell burns bright
When this night dies

Hell burns bright

Kiss me
Kill me
Your kiss is torture
But killing me would be too easy

Kiss me (You're all I'm wanting)
Kill me (This feeling's haunting)
Your kiss is torture
 

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

This was a modern day equivalent to my idea of obsessive,compulsive romantic addiction,if one is lost to death and the stench then fills the room then perhaps the tears of remorse may also pour down one's lamentable cheeks realising that her lover is gone for good, there are no chances to review what is lost and lament the passing of a treasured heart,so my dear this leaves the complexity of ambiguity in abundence for one cannot have what one desires not to be.

[Dillon Cotter]

your lyrics are pretty amazing in this poem, i like it overall. good job!

[Silvario]

a great write. i really enjoyed this. a beautiful flow of words driven by obvious talent. at times i felt as though i was almost reading lyrics.

well done you :)