Moment In Time

Moment In Time

A Poem by Desiree O'Neal

My heart has said it a thousand of time

Your the one on my mind

I think about it every time

Day and night

What a fright

To think youll go

What a mess that causes stress

In a moment in time

Within a flip of a dime

With a glimpse of hope

I hope you stay with me in time

© 2018 Desiree O'Neal


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Nice! I liked it a lot... Simple and sweet... I liked it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Simple and powerful
Conveying the meaning behind the words.. like it alot
Feel free to send me requests

Posted 6 Years Ago


Keep going, eventually your ability to describe your feelings and situations through prose will improve.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant, honestly really good. I enjoyed this a lot. Carry on going

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really good, this is really captivating.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was really good, the presentation was great, we all have that moment in time that we want to go back too 😃 great job😃

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the comment, I appreciate it
Justin

6 Years Ago

Your welcome, u put life into prescriptive!!!! Amazing job 😃

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Added on December 21, 2017
Last Updated on January 16, 2018

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Desiree O'Neal
Desiree O'Neal

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