A Wish

A Wish

A Poem by Desiree O'Neal

In need of music

In the heat of the moment

When your thoughts go blank

You wish it the most

The thought you should never think

They don't understand

You won't let them bend

Under there command

A wish that won't be granted

Under the light of the sun

A wish is still made

With all her might

But just not today

We tell her story

As if she was gone

She's with us

Under the light of the sun



© 2018 Desiree O'Neal


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So very well said, I enjoyed this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much for all your comments I really appreciate it.
Relatable which is also enjoyable.
Keep up the good work and smile!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

6 Years Ago

I will, thank you.

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Added on December 21, 2017
Last Updated on February 17, 2018

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Desiree O'Neal
Desiree O'Neal

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I'm young but I love to write. I love anime, cats and I like to draw. more..

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A Poem by Desiree O'Neal



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