Her

Her

A Poem by Desiree O'Neal

It's something you must not say

For you will make it bend and break

It's something you want to protect

But first you have to accept your regrets

For it will shatter your soul leaving her whole

You're tempted to trade making it fade away

All your worries are gone but she's not to fond

You come back into focus all the memories flood back

Tears roll down past making one more memory last

You speak her name but its not the same

Now that she's gone you are in pain

As you fall to your knees you feel that shape pain in you chest

Your just going to have to accept

That she's already passed






© 2017 Desiree O'Neal



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Desiree, you've powerfully conveyed raw, intense emotions in your poem. I feel the pain, agony, regret, and also a yearning for self-discovery, reflection, and redemption. Perhaps my interpretation is off the mark, but that's what I takeaway. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i don't quite understand poetry but "Tears roll down past making one more memory last" that really touched me.. You have an amazing way in conveying your feelings in your words.. Keep it up

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

7 Months Ago

Thank you for the review and yeah, this is how I normally express my feelings.
This is relatable :( Well, my interpretation may be different but my perspective on it, I can relate. This is a beautiful poem, can't wait to read more from you :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree O'Neal

9 Months Ago

Thanks for your comment and I really enjoyed some of your work, I can't wait for more.
wow this is really intense, and sad too. You express yourself well. quite the emotional read

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desiree, you've powerfully conveyed raw, intense emotions in your poem. I feel the pain, agony, regret, and also a yearning for self-discovery, reflection, and redemption. Perhaps my interpretation is off the mark, but that's what I takeaway. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sad write,full of emotions

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Desiree O'Neal
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I'm young but I love to write. I love anime, cats and I like to draw. more..

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