Final end

This is the end of our journey

Can you believe how long it took for us to make it to the end?

The end of our friendship?

The memories, the tears, the laughter?

Only to realize then you were the kings fool

I offered you a welcoming hand

You took it without a stand

You stood there in silence

There I became your guidance

You were stranded and lost

Had I not saved you, you would've been dead

In return you betrayed me

You stole my pride and drove away

Leaving me, stranded and lost 

There I stood in loneliness

Waiting, searching, hoping

All because of your selfish needs

The sun had come out

But my light had burned out

Without a doubt

This friendship does not count

You'd lie, I'd cry

You'd laugh, I'd snap

Only then have I begun to realize 

you wanted us all for your entertainment

Every time we'd split

You're eyes would lie

You said she doesn't care about me, and said I don't care about her

You said I used him, and said he was cheating on me

All those words were just a script

I now burry this hatchet

For this is now over

Reviews

[fernii]

Nice :)

[Aurora Lynn]

This was a very good poem, and I really liked to read it. It's surprising how many people are really like that in real life, and you sumerize that well in your writing.

I especially liked the lines 'The sun had come out/But my light had burned out' A simple line, yet it spoke very loudly. A very well written line.

A few small things (and may I stress that these are VERY small things). You had two small spelling errors. In the third to last stanza, 'lit' should be 'lie and in the last stanza, 'barry' should be 'burry'.

Other than that,this was a very well written poem. Keep writing!