Passport To Hell

The poem is about a living Arch Angel telling the dead demons that do not have physical form how they were pushed to hell

I will slowly make you think that you have me

I will watch you and your alliance

I will log you

Because I know that you work in groups

I will push you and everyone that tries to help you to hell

You will try to make me think that you are trying to deceive me

When in reality you all demons have deceived you alls selves

Author's Note

The poem is about a living Arch Angel telling the dead demons that do not have physical form how they were pushed to hell

Reviews

[Amber Dawn Agin]

Very strong poem, really powerful and the story hits me hard. Really love your writing style too xx

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi

Thank You for reviewing my poem, I could tell that you have a very strong spirit inside you, and am also glad that you like my writing style.

Hope you have fun at this network and that you get lots of reviews.

Anika

[ScholarlyHughes]

"I will push you and everyone that tries to help you to hell" hits you hard. Very powerful.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi, I was studying for a while I hadn't been here. I am glad you reviewed my poem and truly do appreciate it.

The quotes that you selected, I was trying to say that when demons go get other demons to fight battles that they can't win on their own then they can expect the same treatment, something sort of that they will not be forgiven and that is the reason they will stay down.

[Coyote Poetry]

Can you buy this book? Looked very interesting. My favorite book is Dante Inferno. I like the tale of myth and legend. Most of us had put some thoughts into heaven or hell? Be good or be bad? The good poetry added to the mystery of the book. Thank you dear friend for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Yes dear writer, here is the address and is only 3.25

http://www.philosophersguild.com/Hell-Passport-Notebook.html

[Coyote Poetry]

I will research now.

[Ranbir Singh]

Your writing is good and compact.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you so much for your interpretation, I tried to do it in a monologue style which I know I have to work at it and am certainly looking forward to reading some of your work.

[Ranbir Singh]

Welcome! I look forward to your reviews.

[silverwritinggoddess]

Very strong words! Love it!

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I am glad you liked it, is about the Offices of Arch Angel where he has the power to give that passport and before he does, he scrutunizes everything.

[silverwritinggoddess]

Interesting concept. I like it!

[Zahra]

Powerful speech. Well penned, you can do more with it if you wish by extending it into a dialogue between the angel and demons.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

That is a good idea, I will try that.

Something where the ghost demons want to trespass the mind and when they trespass they say the word "mind" as a way to let the person know what part of the body they are trespassing. Ooh you just gave me an idea for a poem that could be called "Clandestine Operation"