Arch Formation

Arch Formation

A Poem by SquinklaPsyOps
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My Way

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I kneel on my balcony and I pray

As the stars shine on my face

I see myself in a distant future

Where everything is possible

Arch formation

One step at a time

Im alive

© 2015 SquinklaPsyOps


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SquinklaPsyOps
Arch Formation

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Kneeling/Praying is surrendering ourselves including our future to God. Prayer is powerful but you are right..."one step at a time". We should not lose hoe when we can't instantly have what we want.

Smart. Well-done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Being alive is such a precious thing. We need to cherish every moment because we really have no idea when our time will be up. Praying, and envisioning what your future could look like is such a wonderful and scary thing. Sometimes you aren't able to see what you envision, but you live to see the future.our lives are confusing, but we just need to take it one step at a time.

Posted 8 Years Ago


being alive is a good thing...being able to pray for future is another...

and acceptance of what is...a third thing that is good.

j.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SquinklaPsyOps

8 Years Ago

Wow jacob your interpretation does make a lot of sense.

There are persons out there t.. read more
All is possible with prayer. Such beautiful expressions in this poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SquinklaPsyOps

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear writer for your interpretation. It is true prayer is important it builds on us positi.. read more
DIVYA

8 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Yes my sweet darlin..as Shakespeare said..it not in the stsrs but in ourselves that we are underlings.
So if we feel.that light.and let it enrich our own resolve. Our own dreams, nothing is imposdible!
Love darlin
Jennifer

Posted 8 Years Ago


SquinklaPsyOps

8 Years Ago

Hi Jennifer, Your words are truly encouraging and your style of writing is so unique that it makes i.. read more
Felt like this was written from my point of view. I can tell you beautifully travel spiritually like no other. Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


SquinklaPsyOps

8 Years Ago

Thank you dear writer for your valuable interpretation and am glad that you think the same as Arch F.. read more
This is exquisite and full of faith. No matter what people say, we have to keep taking our own small steps - because anything is possible. I definitely see your poetic wings soaring. :) 100/100 A smooth piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


SquinklaPsyOps

8 Years Ago

Hi how are you, your writings did make an impression on me and I do appreciate the words you used in.. read more

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Added on November 28, 2015
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