Till Death Do Us Part

A Poem

Till Death Do Us Part

One step, we dance around us
Two steps, we hold our breath
One look, we fall in love
Two eyes, we forget the rest

squint thee eyes, to focus our hearts
blissful thinking, is related to love
your icy blue eyes, send me sparks
between our fate, heaven and lust

One wish, holding you close
Second wish, standing by your side
One glance, tells you I’m here
Your hand, tells me I’m yours

You know I’ll always protect you
Only death can convince me to let go
My heart will never stop beating
I’ll give my breath to see you glow

Phil

Reviews

[Precious Ambiguity]

I wonder who those icy blue eyes belong to...

I appreciate this... Thank You.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Beautiful imagery,
I loved this write..This is so warm and lovely!
Great write

[waywithwords]

Beautiful imagery of love and warmth my new friend. Your heart must hold the love of your life and it was awesome to read of such a powerful love. Thank you for sharing it.xxx

[An Ordinary Woman]

Awww, this is lovely.

One step, we dance around us
Two steps, we hold our breath
One look, we fall in love
Two eyes, we forget the rest ... this creates such wonderful imagery, very nice, indeed.

[Phil Sanders]

Beautiful use of language .. lovely write ....

[LiteSkinned Dude]

Wow...this is really intuitive with the meaning of true love - I appreciated reading this poem....keep up the good work!!!