Life, the Universe and Boyfriends

a poem for teens

Life, the Universe and Boyfriends

 

 

I read the poems

Of talented teens

 

I read about

Your hopes and dreams

 

I read about

Your boyfriends too

 

And all the pain

They put you through

 

And as I read

I think aloud:

 

Who are these little shitheads

And why don't you just kick them in the balls?

Reviews

[TLK]

Heh. I hope you review just like this, it's necessary.

[Algernonsense]

Tellin it Like It Is : )

[SHEEMA HUQ]

ha ha, a slightly aggrivated end...worthy of an anti social behaviour, caution!

[Stabitha]

lmao

[Bubbles_94]

This made me laugh, it's very well written.

[Stabitha]

Thanks :)

[Daniela May]

i love this so much! its so funny and not forgetting that it's actually a good poem too; well written and all that xxx :D

[Stabitha]

Thank you Daniela :)

[Owlgirl]

HAHAHAHA I love this! Oh my gosh! So true and such a simple solution! The next time one of my friends complains about the-boy-who-broke-her-heart I'm simply sending them a read request. This is great! :D

[Stabitha]

thanks so much :)

[Owlgirl]

lol you're welcome :)

[demureminds]

Such a simple solution haha, I love the bluntness of this one, it's quite refreshing actually. Great writing!

[Stabitha]

cheers :)

[Lina Grey]

Love the ending. As a teenager I can say, this is so true. And, honestly, I did kick mine in the balls. Not that he shows up in my poetry much. ^_^ Thank you.

[Stabitha]

hahaha well done!

[feral61]

cool poem

[Stabitha]

cheers :)

[Pax]

nice, great thoughts. the ending is really funny. well done

[Stabitha]

Thanks Willyam :)