Your eyes

Poetic

Tired and tattered is how I feel,

My heart aches constantly with emotions so real

The lonely nights are the worst,

Left alone with my thoughts, it's truly a curse

But when the sun peeks out and I see your eyes,

I am truly thankful that I am alive.

Reviews

[revalatia]

short and sweet, and completely relatable. Sometimes it only takes one happiness, to drown out every other sadness. Nice one :)

[Jacqueline]

Very sweet and airily romantic! It brought a smile to my face reading this :)

[CC]

Another beautiful piece. I think you are really gifted in this simple, yet powerful poems.