Our First Kiss

My boyfriend and I [7 years strong as of March 27, 2010]]

As we stood within the room,

Our thoughts were of smiles and not of gloom

We looked deep into each others eyes,

There were sparks that flew and a sigh

We moved closer as it felt like a magnetic pull,

Then we held on tight without a lull

As our lips touched there were past lives that flew by,

The room spun quick and our heart beats rise

The kiss was one of pure pleasure,

Our souls connected, a memory to treasure

To this day we are together,

Seven years strong and in love forever.

Reviews

[Brandon]

Very nicely done. Keep it up.

[Brenda Sue]

Very beautifully written and romantic. Wonderfully penned. Great job.