Only You

Only you would make my heart begin to fail,
Only you would make my soul hide in shame
Only you would make my dreams begin to sail,
Only you would make my existence go up in flames.

Reviews

[Stacy]

@ Ed - Not soon enough.....lol

[nicole]

i really liked this. short, but extremely powerful and deep. i loved the rhyme scheme and choice of words. i think this really describes how badly someone can make us feel about ourselves and the effects people can have on our life. really good job.

[Ed Hart]

I think they're coming up with a medication for this...