BloodSport

I don’t play dead,

I am honest.

And this thin thread,

Creates stitches that bound us.

No makeup mascara and stardust

In the perilous truths that are beyond us.

In an awaking,

Glasses breaking,

Congratulations to the holy hymn.

 My hand is still wavering…

And in a dreary blood sport and not much more,

More greetings for the pretentious less understanding towards the poor..

And in the open door,

She stand in between both sides just thinking of the cure…

And the bore of both they lie,

Im still looking towards your self pride.

Your like a queen that’s past her prime,

That regime got canceled!

Kill the radio waves that machine has cancer

And I’m not a hardcore hoodlum,

I don’t carry a gun wouldn’t know how to use one anyway.

But maybe if I packed heat I would keep up

With the dumb stuff a lot of rappers have to say..

But whats the contest who can confess,

To the tiny little needles that prick in our bones,

Life shown,

Through a heart beat beat boxin battle scars

Bein alive is a gift it shouldn’t pound that hard.

But if your walking through hell, keep walking

And if you want to hear truth stop talking.

I am able in my rhetoric rendering rhythmic etiquette,

Not the properness you expect from a princess with a crown of thorns around her head.

Being trusting is not looking at the expiration date

And wanting it so much that you just eat it anyway.

And being loving  is a system of wires and electricity

Complacently devised to feed your energy.

These kings don’t know what up

I’m feeling weirded out by their prevalence

When society is such a mess

But think of this

One day we’ll all be on the moon and we’ll get to meet E.T.

Follow me, one small step for man

Follow me, with bound together hands

Reviews

[marie]

lol i found myself laughing all through this... i just love the flow of it and the hit at society great job, i loved it

[Starfruitanimal]

thanks :) im glad you enjoyed it !

[marie]

:)

[luviva]

wow......... just wow. what a great write and portrayal of today's society!!
so real that it is a wake up call for all.
love the ending bit,starting with "these king...."
great write my friend!!

[Starfruitanimal]

thankyou ! well appreciated

[Starfruitanimal]

This is utterly good, m'dear, your words are a hymn itself....
Very real, but also surreal, in the same time,
You graduate for me here on contradictions
In a beautiful manner.
The words are vivid and real.....

Loved it, xoxo

E.L.

[Starfruitanimal]

thank you beautiful, continue writing. as will i, i resonant a lot with your writings :)

Me too with yours, omg, you're brilliant! thank you dearest !

[Starfruitanimal]

:)

[Ezravis]

Great imagery.

[Starfruitanimal]

thank you words can create pictures like nothin else

[Sacha Davison]

This is great, had to read it twice I was so engaged!

[Starfruitanimal]

thank you very much :)

[Damien Davison]

This is really good, I was surprised at the quality to be quite honest, no offence by any means, just the first things I've read by you. I'm impressed! Great write!

[Starfruitanimal]

thanks ! i really appreciate it, been writing a lot more lately..