Dreaming of Endless Beauty

There is energy in these galaxies

Ripples…

Breathing in, breathing out.

Floating in the night sky

Stars bursting with flames

The red moon wanes.

Sparkle show case casting

Illumination aligned

With rejuvenation.  

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

This is a really beautifully written poem. I admire the way you made the universe colorful in my mind instead of simple dots and a lot of black. It gives the universe a feature of more than just a place, but like a show with many changes and events.
And another concept I liked is the translation of this thing called energy, which is hard to understand, and turn it into this magic show you only see once in a life time.

[Starfruitanimal]

I appreciate your comment,thank you :)

[TheArchAngel]

A short poem, that proves quality over quantity.
I adore the personification in this piece.
well written, and has my imagination in motion.

[Epipsychologist]

Once I read "breathing in, breathing out" I couldn't help reading this to the tune of "Vindicated" by dashboard confessional. Still, this is a really good poem.

[luviva]

wow, absolutly ryt!!
the unednding beuties, i dont knw what your dreams are but reading this poem gives a glimpse of what they might be and it is every one's desire to float in the night sky because of it's beauty and limitlessness.
if tht is compared o human life, just what i thought when reading this, those dreams would be hard to archive and they would be the start of ones' downfall after enjoying it forever and seeking more... u knw!!
enwe all in all a great piece1

[Inda]

This is nice, lots of beauty in the universe indeed and this poem is a good reflection of that beauty. Great job!

[Ezravis]

I like the way that you gave the vastness of the whole universe personality. There is clearly so much more to it all than just a bunch of sparkly lights in a darkened sky. Thank you for sharing.

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a tesseract fused with a torus comes to mind. I can see the manifolds and rounded metrics in full living colour!

[Starfruitanimal]

thank you sweetheart :)