Slipping Through the Cracks

Slipping Through the Cracks

A Poem by StarryNights

Slipping,
Falling,
Drowning;
Let Me Inside.

© 2011 StarryNights


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Great
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Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice. Less IS more

Posted 13 Years Ago
Well done, excellently conveyed.

Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow. :) This is great. Nice word choice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago
wow. This is the best one of these I've read. It took me ten words just to say that.... excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago
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LJW
Excellent. SO hard to do with so few words but you gave deep meaning to this. Wow.

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on February 18, 2011
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StarryNights
StarryNights

Alberta, Canada



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